Their is no fehler hier
Interne Notiz:
Please prepare and plan your presentation so that it lasts half the time to have the other half of the time available for discussion and documentation of final conclusion and action items afterwards.
Please kind in mind that the schedule is already very though, and their is no room for extension.
“kind in mind” reimt sich zwar sehr schon, ist aber leider falsch. “there” und “their” sind inhaltlich auch sehr verschieden.